Portfolios (not finished)
Monday, March 17, 2008
Name of the photographer- Jordan Morph

General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)- Sports

List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio- Lighting with the story, not telling much with the stories, people on the phone

List two things the judges like- lighting, composition

What is your overall impression? What did you like or not like?
I thought it was really good, the lighting and composition, like the judges said, was making it very interesting. But the first story messed a lot of it up. It was supposed to be about a guy having physical therapy but I just didn't see it. It didn't make sense to me at all. Nothing was really going on.

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Name of photographer- Melissa Golden

General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)- stories

List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio - busy, motion in important places, getting the picture after the important part

List two things the judges like- the portrait, use of the power lines

What is your overall impression? What did you like or not like?
The stories weren't unique, they were typical, and the second one really didn't show much of a story. The other pictures were okay, not really fantastic, but nice composition-wise.

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Name of photographer- Josh Birnbaum

General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)- photography

List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio - Focus, background, pasting pictures together

List two things the judges like- getting in the action, Funny/humorous

What is your overall impression? What did you like or not like?
I thought it was good up until the first story, good moments. The first story kind of ruins it. The second story was pretty good, a couple pictures were okay.

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Name of photographer - Carlos Delgado

General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)- Story

List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio - cluttered, RGB levels, looking at the camera

List two things the judges like- clouds, expressions

What is your overall impression? What did you like or not like?
I thought the stories were amazing. The singles weren't so great, but the stories were real and not so common. Like a person doing all of her things with her feet, that is extremely interesting.

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