Negative critique
Friday, September 28, 2007
There were really no problems with my negatives other than the water spots, but that isn't much of a problem since I can get rid of them. I really liked most of my photos but some of them I really had no idea what was going through my head. Like one photo, you can only see lots of the back of peoples heads and one person's half of face through a bunch of arms and it really isn't focused very well (that was number 5). And another where I caught a person, but there is an uneven amount of action going on around him. It just looks rather messy (that was number 6). Number 4 is pretty good, I caught some good emotion on a girl's face but I also caught someone's back on half of the photo which sortof ruins the picture.

My favorite's were 2 and 3 because 3 got a REALLY good emotion on the guy's face with some other people around him lauging and making funny faces from the excitement. Then 2 was good because I caught a person in an awkward position along with what the people around her were doing to put her in that awkward position. You can see the strange face she is making and the other people around her paying no attention to her and just minding their own business.

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